Wednesday, March 18, 2009

How to make logandale better.

What would make Logandale a better school? I think Logandale could be better in three ways. First off, some teachers give detentions for everything you do and they shouldn’t. Second, the food in school should be improved. Third, the teachers don’t listen to you and they should. Don’t you think this would make Logandale better?
First off, some teachers give detention at anything you do. Even if you just tried to help somebody, they will write you up for talking. When they said help your classmates for the work, and you talk to them to help them they will write you up like what happened to me, and I think they shouldn’t do that, that’s what’s making the kids go away. And when you’re trying to tell them something and they don’t believe you, they write you up. When you’re in cafeteria you just come and give them something they want, they will write you up, who wants to get written up for no reason?
Second of all, the food in the school. The food is always the same, some students are getting tired of the food. They rarely change the food, only like ones or sometimes twice a week. And when the principal and teachers ask for your opinion they don’t do nothing. Don’t you want people to listen to your personal opinion?
Third of all, the teachers don’t listen to you. When you get in trouble they don’t listen to your side of the story. They don’t listen to your opinion when you tell them something. That’s why kids get mad at the teachers and they want to go to another school. The teachers should listen to the students. Don’t you want people to listen to you?
In conclusion, there are three ways to make the school better. First, some teachers give dentention at everything you do. Second, the food in the school. Third, the teachers don’t listen to you. Don’t you think this will make the Logandale better?

1 comment:

  1. Hey watz up? I agree with u Bernie, about giving better food, n that teachers dont listen 2 us when they are suppose to. Nice essay :0

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